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Oh yes indeed, I wrote a sequel to "Unspeakable" long ago, and it has been languishing on my computer since for want of a venue that would buy it. That it never found that venue bothered me a great deal, because there was a very special person in it, with a very special viewpoint, and I grieved that she never had the chance to speak.
But now she does.
I had forgotten that anadi are most active after nightfall—I never had regular congress with them. Not counting my illicit affair, of course. When I arrived at the edge of the pen I could see them moving and they glimmered, precious, past the veil of night: silver gleam in their eyes, pale electrum glow over their softly scaled bodies.
Oh, they were beautiful. I dropped my trembling head into my arms, resting it against the topmost bar of the pen.
"You came back."
I looked up and found an exquisite sliver of star and shadow standing in front of me, and I felt a quiver of excitement and revulsion. Bad enough to have been perverted enough to love Ekkuli, a neuter, rather than another emodo like myself or Nashada. But to feel this twinge for an anadi? Was I hopelessly corrupted?
"You have that look," she continued in a voice clear and light, like pale tea. "I don't see it often. Why are you here, if we upset you so?"
"Why are you talking to me?" I managed hoarsely. "What good will it do?"
"I don't know," she said. "But no one talks to me, and I miss that."
"You were something else before you Turned?"
She blinked a few times, lashes glowing. "No. I have always been anadi. That doesn't mean I was born without a mind to enjoy conversation." She ran her fingers along my arm, as if checking me for warmth and life. "Sometimes I think other Jokka turn from the anadi before we lose our minds. They don't want to invest their hearts in someone who will not remember them in ten years, twenty. I suppose I understand."
"But it upsets you," I said.
"Of course," she replied without rancor. "Wouldn't it upset you?"
"I never think of such things," I said, which was the absolute truth. It's why I needed Ekkuli so badly.
"How nice to never need to," she said, withdrawing her hand.
And I—I captured it and didn't remember deciding to do so. "Wait. I'm sorry. I didn't mean to be thoughtless."
"I'm used to it," she said with the flick of a tail that is the most tired of shrugs among the Jokka. "You too will pass through my life, like all the others."
That's right: we finally get to talk to an anadi who is no rebel like Kediil, no firebrand like Jekun, no revolutionary like Dlane. Here is an anadi with a mind... but who understands why anadi have the lot they do, and blames no one for it.
There is only one piece of art directly related to this story. And here it is.

The Jeweler's Apprentice
If you have been looking for the final perspective of females in this setting, here it is at last. And you get to see how Tañel, Ekkuli and Nashada are getting along in their new city! So if you want to return to old friends and maybe taste a little of the bittersweetness, and meet a remarkable new female, this is your story. Enjoy it. :)
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July 22 2011, 00:46:59 UTC 10 months ago
Snapped it up without a second thought, and I am eager to read this [as soon as I find my iPod!]. Will review when I finish.
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July 22 2011, 01:14:21 UTC 10 months ago
I think this was unexpected in part because it's the first time we've seen the suggestion that not all houses breed females and not all emodo are driven to breed. It's another interesting facet to the Jokka.
Also, I really like Anaia. ^_^ She reminds me of some people I know and have known. :)
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July 22 2011, 11:51:08 UTC 10 months ago
(I also suspect that eventually she'll make another Jokka collection, like Clays, if there is enough demand, enough sales of Clays to make it a feasible time investment, and if she has enough stories available.)
July 22 2011, 12:48:15 UTC 10 months ago
In the mean-time, you can read the other Jokka stories in Clays Beneath the Skies, the first volume, if you have not already bought it. If I don't see enough sales of that volume, I won't be able to set aside the time to do a second... so if you're interested, I encourage you to buy it! :)
July 22 2011, 14:08:03 UTC 10 months ago
July 22 2011, 10:04:33 UTC 10 months ago
Hnngg.
The first had me in tears. *shrug* It's been that kind of week. Beautifully written though, and very effective as it most certainly elicited an emotion out of me.
Second?
Lovely.
I have to say that my only criticism of your work is.. the brevity of it! I understand both from a financial and time-management standpoint that longer fiction is not lucrative, but that's how I like mine! I eat 18 page stories for snacks!
*grin*
Thank you for another pretty story. I love reading about the Jokka. They're my favorites.
I'll get around to reviewing everything I've purchased over the next couple of days. 'till then, welcome back from con and I hope you're having a great week!
July 22 2011, 13:40:08 UTC 10 months ago
So yes, there will be more novels! As I get them out there. :)