M. C. A. Hogarth ([info]haikujaguar) wrote,
@ 2007-10-21 23:34:00
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The Aphorisms of Kherishdar: Nalan
The second-to-last aphorism, both chronologically and to be posted. Only one more to go...!


NALAN
M.C.A. Hogarth

nalan [ nah LAWN ], (noun) – influence; one's effect on others (conscious or not).


     "Eat, friend," the Physician said, ladling more broth into my bowl. "I don't need you joining the petitioners outside my clinic."
      I smiled and obeyed. Every week in winter the Physician brought his broth and I made tea, and we whiled away an afternoon in my studio. Half his reason was to escape his work for a time... the other half, as he forthrightly declared, was "to keep you from brooding. You spend too much time alone."
      Few people come to me in winter when they could be indoors with their families. It made me think too much of my own, living outside the city... and of my wife and daughter, both sped from me.
      With the Physician gone, I returned to my table. My list of pending commissions was blank... the only piece on my desk was a half-realized painting I had started for myself, which I now resumed. Snow was rare in winter, so the fields I painted were dull umber: the wan sun that illumined this landscape could put no sparkle in dew. I mixed a darker brown for the well-maintained fence alongside the fields, remembering it in every particular as my brush described the burls in the posts. Yellow ochre brought forth a dusty road, shadowed in lilacs made with the same cold blue I used for the sky.
      My studio door opened as I washed my fingers between water changes. I looked up and then stood swiftly so I could bow. My lord's heir stood on my threshold, accompanied by his cousin, whom I had advised earlier in the year.
      "Calligrapher," the heir said, smiling at me. "The day's greetings to you."
      "And you, my lord," I said, Abased. "How would you be served?"
      He glanced at his cousin and said, "We were just walking... I thought I'd stop and see the art." Remembering his duties, he added, "And your accounting."
      Hiding a smile, I bowed and said, "The books will be set out for you."
      The two made a show of going over my records before turning with more relish to the sample art. Assured that they did not need my attention and warmed by their presence, I returned to my painting.
      I felt the heir's gaze sometime later.
      "It's beautiful," he said. "Is it ours?"
      I nodded. "The fields in our district, where I grew up."
      He watched me paint a little longer, then said, "May I have it?" He blushed. "You can refuse."
      "No," I said, flattered. "All that is mine is yours."
      He nodded. And then, "There are no people in it...?"
      Surprised, for I hadn't noticed, I said, "An oversight. I will rectify it."
      The following day I sent the finished piece before closing the studio and heading for the nearest cafe. The Physician was right. I spent too much time alone. An Ai-Naidari is only as important as what he shares with others.
      I didn't stop to write that one down. It would keep.


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[info]eseme
2007-10-22 05:15 am UTC (link)
I am curious to know what figures were added to the painting? A couple walking down the road? Children in the field?

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-10-22 05:40 am UTC (link)
I have asked, and he answered: People walking up the road.

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[info]acrimonius
2007-10-22 05:36 am UTC (link)
The series of Aphorisms sound like they could also be turned into an oracle of some sort.

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-10-22 05:39 am UTC (link)
Oh?

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[info]acrimonius
2007-10-22 06:12 am UTC (link)
The individual concepts could probably be switched around to sound more like an answer, or they could be left as-is, if there were some way to work out how to ask the questions and get responses through divination. The I Ching reads like a book of poetry to me, though, so maybe I'm just crazy. :P

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Like bibliomancy...
[info]ysabetwordsmith
2007-10-22 06:23 am UTC (link)
... there's actually an "Answer Book" along those lines, though I'm not terribly impressed with it. I've seen people get better results with a book of famous quotations. The Bible is the preferred tool for bibliomancy; I had a college teacher who was *quite* good at that, and some distant relatives. Anyhow you ask your question, open the book, point to a line, and read it as your answer.

Alternatively, aphorisms could be written on slips of paper, or wood, and drawn from a container rather like runes. I think the book style is a better match, though.

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Re: Like bibliomancy...
[info]archangelbeth
2007-10-22 02:06 pm UTC (link)
Or computerize it -- give a line (linking to the rest of the aphorism story it belongs to) randomly from the whole set...

Poor fellow. The stark beauty of a mere landscape... Interesting that the lack of people is what was noticed.

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[info]razzek
2007-10-22 06:31 am UTC (link)
The description of his painting really brought it clearly to mind. It was lovely. ^_^

I can't remember if this has been said explicitly anywhere, but what happened to his family? Have they passed away, or is he simply not allowed to live with them anymore? If this gets answered anywhere or in the future, I will gladly wait to find out. :)

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[info]jeriendhal
2007-10-22 09:02 am UTC (link)
I believe his wife passed away (IIRC). His daughter lived with her aunt when he was assigned to his duties as Calligrapher and he visited with her when the Aunt brought her up. Then she was assigned as a sort of personal entertainer (no, not that kind of entertainer) who works for a particular family exclusively. A prestigious and comfortable position, but of a lower caste than the Calligrapher, making it extremely unlikely that he was ever going to see her again.

He was happy for her though.

Really.

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-10-22 09:08 am UTC (link)
The answer you want is here. :)

He visits, of course, but not often.

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[info]gryphart
2007-10-22 08:35 am UTC (link)
Awwww, Calligrapher painting. :)

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Landscapes
[info]ysabetwordsmith
2007-10-22 03:48 pm UTC (link)
You know, now that I think of it, that's not an uncommon style of painting in the Midwest -- a rather bleak autumn or winter landscape. Sometimes it's a long view over a field. Often there will be one or two closer items for visual interest: fenceposts, a wagon, a watering can, etc. Go to any art fair or street fair with artists around here, and somebody will have that. Even the guy who painted outhouses had a couple of larger-size longshots that he did for his own pleasure.

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[info]artfulruin
2007-10-22 02:21 pm UTC (link)
This one affects me deeply. I can't say any more. Thank you.

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[info]shdragon
2007-10-22 04:49 pm UTC (link)
I didn't stop to write that one down. It would keep.

That part made me very happy for the Calligrapher. And oh how this one has meanings for me too (especially when combined with other LJ posts from other friends today.) I should have this painted on my ceiling or something to kick me in the head every day when I wake up and remind me to get out more.

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