M. C. A. Hogarth ([info]haikujaguar) wrote,
@ 2007-10-14 20:51:00
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The Aphorisms of Kherishdar: Aisim
For [info]manycolored, to address her thought about child-rearing; [info]themaskmaker, who wanted to see a baby; more looks at both other castes and how the city works for [info]ysabetwordsmith; a little more of the worldview in response to [info]feste_sylvain's unease about it... I even got [info]tuftear's flowing draperies in. Enjoy!


AISIM
M.C.A. Hogarth

aisim [ eye SEEM ], (noun) – value; only applies to people. In this case, a person's worth, as measured by the things important to Ai-Naidar: the size of their family, their contribution to society and how well they fulfill their ishas.


      The merchant family spilled into my studio, rife with laughter and excitement, adults, children, elders... so many I was hard put to count them. They were weavers by their elegant garments and so from out-district, for no weavers worked beneath my lord's aegis. I wondered at their arrival until a pregnant woman and her gladsome husband approached me.
      "How may I serve?" I asked, smiling.
      The male bowed. "There is hope that there might be enough nemet slips for thirty-odd people, Calligrapher."
      I laughed. "Oh, yes," and went for the bowl. The game was tradition: one virtue was written on each folded paper slip, and all those old enough to undertake childcare drew one to see what fate decreed they would teach the newcome baby. While some families created their nemet slips, it was customary for Public Servants who worked with paper to have a set available.
      I handed the bowl to the woman; while she passed it among her family I turned to the man nearest me, holding a curious baby.
      "May I?" I asked.
      "Gladly," he said, absolving me of any accidental touch error.
      I reached first; he transferred the child to me, and with that warmth against my chest I watched the merchants crow over their results. The eldest, drawing "love," sighed and shook her head as the others laughed: "Advice to cool unwonted ardor!" The two youngest, twins determined to have adult duties, drew "life wisdom," causing identical looks of dismay: "You can figure that out together," an uncle said.
      They were discussing the results when the door opened a final time for a reed of a girl in shimmering layers of rose gossamer: their work, from their pride, and one of their regals, from their silent deference.
      "I am Adalia sul'Matir-masirkedi," she said, naming herself the heir to a district across the city. Her servant, who'd followed her inside, offered me five favor tokens dangling from a cord. "Thank you for the game," she said.
      I bowed to her and said, Abased, "There is no charge for it, masirkedi."
      She smiled, bright and sudden, all the way to her gray eyes. "So I thought. This is for your lord. I would like to commission a Book of Precedents for this family."
      Gasps rippled through the merchants. There were rules for which of my services each caste was allowed to request without special dispensation... but even if they'd thought of it, this family probably could not have afforded the cross-district fee for something so expensive. Merchants tended to commission one utilitarian copy of their Book as a house reference. Their regal's gift would be a priceless family heirloom.
      She turned to them and said, "You have served my family and the city well for generations." And bowed.
      They returned her bow, deeper.
      After they'd left, the warmth of the baby persisted in my arms. I wondered what her unborn peer would add to Kherishdar.... for all Ai-Naidar exist to have value. I kissed my calluses and returned to the work that served my lord.


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[info]archangelbeth
2007-10-15 12:55 am UTC (link)
Awwwwwww! (I'm betting that the slips aren't cast in stone, but more of a... "here, this is something you should think about and try to teach/model for the kid" starting place? I.e., there'll be plenty of life wisdom from the eldest as well?)

I bet that'd make a really cool sketch, should the muse strike you. Flowing fwoosh and baby and people!

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-10-15 01:08 am UTC (link)
Nah... it's more of a game. Most people don't take it seriously though there are people who do. Kind of like... hmm. Fortune cookies or something. Except slightly more serious. Typically, they say though that the thing you draw is the unexpected thing you teach the kid. The rest of it is up to you. ;)

Oh, gosh. A sketch of this would take forever. Thirty+ people, plus Calligrapher and regal with servant? In a studio? Yow. :)

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[info]miintikwa
2007-10-15 02:41 am UTC (link)
I must admit to a heart-ful desire to see the Calligrapher with the baby. Something about the idea of him holding the little just tugs at me.

It's probably leftover *happysigh* from seeing you with the baby.

(And sorry for the inability to communicate what I mean other than with the "*happysigh*" but that's the closest I could come to what I feel/think when I think of you with your daughter.)

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[info]archangelbeth
2007-10-15 03:01 am UTC (link)
Heeee! I do like that game.

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[info]tuftears
2007-10-15 07:28 pm UTC (link)
You can do it! *purrs encouragingly* And they're all dressed elegantly too!

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[info]feste_sylvain
2007-10-15 02:37 am UTC (link)
We do see the noblesse oblige here which is mostly lip service among humans. It is good to see such a system that actually works.

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Some of us have that
[info]ysabetwordsmith
2007-10-15 03:31 am UTC (link)
It's rarer than it should be among humans, but not wholly unknown. It's *quite* common in the Society for Creative Anachronism, which tends to attract people who are fond of liege bonds. It's not uncommon in Pagan culture, where covens are often close-knit and sometimes linked by descent of training.

My own conceptualization of it is broader ... "my people" are the members of my family plus friends and folks in the local community who look up to me. I tend to be very generous with hospitality, and fiercely protective of my people against any outside threats.

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It might be a game to the Ai-Naidar...
[info]ysabetwordsmith
2007-10-15 03:27 am UTC (link)
... but that just got added to my list of activities to offer new parents in my local magical community. I've also considered having people make out little blessings to put in a jar, but the right context for that hasn't quite come up yet.

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[info]pshaw_raven
2007-10-15 04:13 am UTC (link)
I have been reading a while, but I just wanted to let you know, I feel out of my world when reading your work. I am there, and in your society, and to stop is being ripped away. Great, clear and wonderful work. :>

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-10-15 04:28 am UTC (link)
Oh my... thank you!

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[info]themaskmaker
2007-10-15 12:48 pm UTC (link)
This is so lovely. Warm, happy, and yet it still has the feel of "otherness" that makes it clear that these people aren't human.

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[info]siege
2009-01-08 07:43 am UTC (link)
The aphorism is not written as a banner, but in the heart of our narrator, that all Ai-Naidar exist to have value.

I suspect that would be something gifted to the least-respected; but I am egalitarian, and caste is not my calling now.

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