M. C. A. Hogarth ([info]haikujaguar) wrote,
@ 2007-08-19 16:05:00
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Entry tags:ai-naidar, humor, meta-conversations

Pants, Part 2
The Ai-Naidar have sent this tired aunerai scribe to bed; every time I try to talk to them, they shoo me off. So I leave them to their own devices and, apparently, yours.

"So then," the Calligrapher says. "It appears that skirts and robes, particularly colored ones, are decorative, and that one only decorates women. Men are not decorated because they are expected to labor at work that would muss their clothes."

Shame glances over at the as-yet-unnamed fathrikedi from the novel. She is lying in indolent grace on a divan, wearing jewelry and her lovely mane of curls. When he looks at her, she smiles at him with a touch of impishness.

"Wearing more clothing is considered decorative?" Shame asks.

The Calligrapher begins to speak and then closes his mouth.

"Wait," Shame says. "Do you suppose they believe that only women can be fathriked?"

"Perhaps they do not believe that men can nourish the eye and the spirit," the Calligrapher suggests.

"I understand that the scribe thinks of our tale as a fantasy of manners," Shame says. "Though I begin to wonder if we share any manners in common with the aunera at all. Do you suppose they will understand us?"

"Always asking questions, thee," the Calligrapher murmurs. "For which answers I have not."

A very small smile quirks the corner of Shame's mouth.


Stardancer Home.



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I can't remember...
[info]dakiwiboid
2007-08-19 08:25 pm UTC (link)
Aren't there some sorts of Al-Naidar um...concubines (can't think of a better word for it) who do talk, and who are well-known for their wit?

I dunno. I don't mind that the Decorations aren't clothed. I do mind that they're expected to be silent.

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Re: I can't remember...
[info]lotos_rose
2007-08-20 12:45 am UTC (link)
Are they utterly silent, or is it that they just don't tell sensitive information?

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[info]stokerbramwell
2007-08-19 08:35 pm UTC (link)
You know, I grow to like their culture more and more.

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[info]dark_blade
2007-08-19 08:50 pm UTC (link)
I suppose the simplest summation is that, in this country, at least, we are a clash of cultures and ideas. Sometimes they blend nicely, and sometimes they result in a multitude of opposing ideas that leave anyone trying to puzzle through them quite perplexed.

You are, to a large degree, unified by your.. apologies, memory fails me. That great big book you have, that explains laws and how one should act in what situation. Are there not still little quirks and customs that vary from town to town, city to city? Here those quirks and variance in customs vary -widely- from place to place, and culture to culture. How a person is defined and categorized is also different here, and oftentimes clothing does much of it. In Chicago, a highly urban area, someone wandering around in a lot of makeup and a preponderance of velvet and lace in black with only a bit of dark shading, with vividly dyed hair may only be glanced at for wearing clothing too warm for the weather if it's midsummer. In some rural areas, such gothic attire may bring whisperings of "satanist" and dark looks. Most schools would likely not hire a person thusly dressed, but a bookstore looking for someone to work their fiction section might.

Also, she sends apologies for being confusing last night.

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[info]dracosphynx
2007-08-19 08:55 pm UTC (link)
Shoo! Off to bed with you!

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Fantasy of Manners
[info]shellefly
2007-08-20 02:35 am UTC (link)
I never heard that term before - it's delightful.
Thank you for adding it to my vocabulary.

(I'm using my Aramis icon because Dumas is ref'd in the Wikipedia entry. Oh, I do love Aramis!)

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[info]dashingpooka
2007-08-20 02:39 am UTC (link)
What a wonderful tale. If you ever decide to sell these...please, please let me know. o.O

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[info]aefenglommung
2007-08-20 02:49 am UTC (link)
There would seem to be a flaw in your translation program. Whatever language the Calligrapher is speaking, I'm sure that his pronoun would be translated into English in the Vocative, as
"Always asking questions, thou . . ."

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