M. C. A. Hogarth ([info]haikujaguar) wrote,
@ 2007-06-06 13:33:00
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The Aphorisms of Kherishdar: GELES
Because the Calligrapher is not always a perfect paragon of serene self-confidence.


GELES
M.C.A. Hogarth

geles [ geh LESS ], (noun) – contrasting note; that which, against a backdrop of similar feelings, items or things offers a distinct counter without which one would lose the appreciation of that which one is experiencing

      The sun warmed my head as I left the market with a basket of fruit, cheese, tea and a turquoise scarf for a cousin who collected them. As I entered the public square, the fresh fragrance of the blooms on the decorative trees perfumed the breeze, and there amid their nodding grace I found the pedestal that had been empty this morning in use. A half-dressed Ai-Naidari stood on it, arms outstretched and palms up, head cast down and teeth clenched on a golden disc. Arranged in a semi-circle around the pedestal were broad bowls: fine fabrics, books, jewelry, perfume oils... any of which would have cost more than my entire morning's shopping.
      Nearby several Ai-Naidar looked through the bowls while three priests of Kulind in their storm-gray robes watched. As I approached, one of the priests greeted me.
      "Calligrapher."
      "Priest," I said. We were both Public Servants, so our speech was merely polite, not ranked. "What is this?"
      "A Correction," the priest said. He nodded toward the male on the pedestal. "One of our number was caught using temple funds for his own aggrandizement. He is displayed here for public censure, and the items he bought with temple money are available for any to claim or donate to the temple, if they so desire. Even to the very clothes he wears... he is to keep none of it. Will you add your voice to the rebuke?"
      I did not desire it, but it was my duty: civilization requires ikul, public censure, the condemnation of wrongful behavior.
     The priest had had extravagant desires... in the bowls were several scarves that would have made my cousin the talk of the province, and not just for their notorious past. I lifted one, a blue so deep and so bright it made my eyes water when contrasted against the warm creams and golds of the buildings bordering the square.
      I walked closer, looked up at the male; his eyes opened, just enough to shade the lower eye-lid. If there was remorse there, there was not light enough to see... nor, perhaps, would I have anyway. His harsh Correction suggested a resistance to gentler means of persuasion, and working through the emotions raised by it would take time. Pity swelled in my heart and I draped the scarf over his bare feet, covering them, before backing away.
     When I chanced one last look at the errant priest's face, there was something of a twisted smile on what I could see of his mouth. He dipped his head almost imperceptibly to me.
      I walked home, feeling as if I had shirked my duty, and yet I could have done nothing else. It was not in me to be the voice of discipline. I returned to my work and prayed that I had helped, somehow... even in my weakness. My pen found the words.
     A strong society turns all responses to its uses.
      May it be so.


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[info]unmutual
2007-06-06 06:12 pm UTC (link)
I enjoy your writing so much!

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[info]archangelbeth
2007-06-06 06:37 pm UTC (link)
Awwwww!

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[info]newroticgirl
2007-06-06 06:40 pm UTC (link)
Sometimes I wish /our/ society could punish people like this. The idea of things stolen being made freely available to those who want/need... or donated back to the victim of the crime... it appeals to my sense of justice.

I love these stories, even if I don't always comment. They are wonderful and lovely and exactly what they should be. So rich and full with just a sniff.

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[info]themaskmaker
2007-06-06 06:49 pm UTC (link)
Yes, I love this sort of justice.

It does happen sometimes in our society. I heard a couple of years ago about a judge who sentenced a couple of teenagers to community service. But he stipulated that they had to put on a picnic for a bunch of kids, serving them and their families.

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[info]tonithegreat
2007-06-06 06:42 pm UTC (link)
I love reading these.

But for some reason this one disturbed me more with thoughts of "wow, those poor ai-nadiri are brainwashed," than any of the others. It made me think of this state-worshipping film, probably because it was being discussed on NPR the other day. It isn't a good analogy, I suppose, because the society of Kherishdar isn't power hungry. It already has such complete control over the beings that are in it. Chilling.

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[info]tonithegreat
2007-06-06 07:25 pm UTC (link)
Upon reflection, there were two- no make that three- things that really got to me in this one:

  • The allusion to the idea that a very harsh punishment was dispensed without checks and balances. But perhaps there were checks and balances of some alien sort.
  • The idea that the calligrapher could not be satified with his act of compassion as just a very "human" and possibly flawed act of being-to-being compassion. Instead he needed to think of it in terms of a tool of society, even if it was a potentially faulty tool. I just keep balking at the hive mind. Can't the calligrapher enjoy and feel proud of his own acts as things that he has power over and not just in the context of society? I guess not, because he wouldn't be who is without the society.
  • The little detail of the punished guy's twisted smile made me wonder if even the crushing power of Ai-Nadiri society would be enough to get him functioning smoothly again.

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  • [info]puffbird
    2007-06-06 06:53 pm UTC (link)
    The Calligrapher's feeling of duty to assist in public censure... it reminds me of my own feeling of duty when I received my notice of summons for jury duty. Similar... and yet, not quite. Fascinating.

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    [info]stokerbramwell
    2007-06-06 07:12 pm UTC (link)
    That is a wonderful idea for a Correction. Hope it takes root.

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    [info]tuftears
    2007-06-06 07:30 pm UTC (link)
    An interesting story... I find myself wondering if there would be repercussions. Well, it's undoubtedly a good thing if a story leaves you wanting more!

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    [info]wolfbrotherjoe
    2007-06-06 07:48 pm UTC (link)
    Odd ... I've recently been pondering an essay on society's need to balance justice and mercy... and how difficult it is to do just that.

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    I love the Calligrapher's mercy
    [info]dakiwiboid
    2007-06-07 03:02 am UTC (link)
    I also love that he responded by offering mercy with a thing of beauty.

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    Re: I love the Calligrapher's mercy
    [info]siege
    2009-01-08 07:01 am UTC (link)
    Love cleanses darkness.

    In this case, the darkness of heavy punishment upon a broken soul.

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    Re: I love the Calligrapher's mercy
    [info]siege
    2009-01-08 05:40 pm UTC (link)
    It occurs to me, after a night's rest, that the smirk in evidence may be a realization that being gifted back any of these items ultimately makes things harder on the subject...

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    [info]silversliver
    2007-06-07 05:07 am UTC (link)
    I like this illustration of the conflict (or at least grey area) that seems inherent in duty, compassion, and what is right.

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    Difficult Choices
    [info]ysabetwordsmith
    2007-06-07 07:03 pm UTC (link)
    Dealing with misbehavior is a challenge that all civilizations (and smaller social units, like families) must face, and it always poses difficult choices. Ideally, one finds a method to illuminate the wrongdoing, or resolve the imbalance behind it, in a way that will prevent future occurrences.

    In the earlier example of Correction, we saw the Ai-Naidari version working well, if uncomfortably. Here ... maybe not so well, and even less comfortably, but no system is perfect. Divining the perfect Correction may not be a common skill; perhaps the need outstrips the available experts, and so falls on other authorities, who may do a moderately apt instead of precisely apt job of it.

    As for checks and balances, consider that public dealings incorporate individual reactions. If people don't feel the punishment fits the crime, they'll probably participate less vigorously. They're evidently free to make some personal expressions, outside the obvious, the way the Calligrapher did.

    I love how these stories are like gems carved from a larger holo-sculpture. Each one is tiny, yet contains an image of the whole. There are questions and hints pointing off in all kinds of directions, some of them answerable with this or previous examples and other not.

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