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The Aphorisms of Kherishdar: AUNERA
This one's about us.


AUNERA
M.C.A. Hogarth

aunera [ au NEH rah ], (noun): Both a color--emerald green, very lush and deep, with a slight tint of blue--and anything or anyone alien, from people and worlds to emotions and thoughts (though more rarely used for the latter).

      "Our lord said I should have you paint something for me, that you should choose," the man said, moving from one display to the next with a brash energy that married not at all with our attenuated limbs. I did my best not to stare at him, for he spoke without any caste markers at all: my caste was obvious with my studio in the Public Servant's area, so I typically relied on my visitors to tell me my place by their speech.
      He rambled on as he examined my work samples. "Such harmonious art, ah! I have been in aunerai lands for a year now, managing our lord's business. I have not seen such works in too long. You understand."
      At last I did, yes. One year among aliens--aunera--would certainly be sufficient to strip any of us of refinement. And if he was of sufficient status to negotiate with out-worlders, then he was kin to my liegelord, and a noble. Now that I could speak without impropriety, I said, Abased, "A work will be created for you... you need only specify when it should be ready."
      "Delightful, thank you," the man said. He closed his eyes and pressed his fingers to his brow. "Oh, I have been doing this wrong, I'm sorry. I forget. You know the aunera have no castes? It's so hard to tell how to be polite to any of them, or where you belong."
      "It cannot be imagined," I said, meaning it. "It must have been very difficult not to give offense."
      "And they take offense at the strangest things," the man said, now speaking properly. "Is a week enough time?" He fidgeted; apparently being among aliens had also shattered his body-calm. I could not help but pity him. "If not in a week... well, it can be sent through the Gates, perhaps."
      "You shall have it in a week," I promised, and he left after bidding me an irregular farewell... for what noble needs to take leave of a mere public servant? Truly, the aliens had inculcated bizarre habits in him. I knew then exactly what he must have.
      Setting aside all other projects, I cut the largest parchment I could find, set out the most expensive and delicate of my paints. There on the client table, the only space large enough, I painstakingly drew the entire heirarchy of Kherishdar... from the most rarified of beings, Thirukedi, emperor and god, to the lowest of the low, the umudked caste-rank created specifically so that no one need be born at the bottom of the tree. I painted the dozens of caste-ranks in their specified colors, from top to bottom; I traced the Wall of Birth that separated the nobles and regals from the rest of us in gold leaf.
      And then, in broad letters across the top I wrote the truth of Kherishdar:
      Treat gently with each and every Ai-Naidari, for ever there is one born below you... and one above.

The Aphorisms Project


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[info]archangelbeth
2007-05-27 02:01 pm UTC (link)
Awwwwwwwwwww.

Umudked? One that none are born to... And none inhabit? A "fictional" rank? Or one that someone can only fall to by their own actions?

Poor ambassador.

(Why "green" for the outworlders? A greener world? Green uniforms on the first ones to show up? A name that sounded similar? "We are outworlders" -- "you are green? Well, okay...")

Poor, poor ambassador. Outland customs... (Especially if he's around hyper, twitchy aliens. I know how calm-shattered I can get around one hyper, twitchy 7-year-old, and that's merely the "alienness" of an extrovert (the kid) around introverts (her parents).)

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[info]wolfbrotherjoe
2007-05-27 02:12 pm UTC (link)
Umudked - those who choose criminal lifestyles. One that someone can only fall to by their own actions. Exceptions with only the 'outside of society' aspect of the role, but not the responsibility of the role.

I think. I could be misremembering.

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-27 02:23 pm UTC (link)
There are a lot of things in Kherishdar which "exist solely so that they should not exist," more or less. That having them exist and not taking advantage of them is the point, because it's stressing that they matter but that they shouldn't be abused. If that makes sense? It's a bit twisty.

But [info]wolfbrotherjoe is mostly correct below. The lowest caste is comprised of two...? Three? I can't see yet ranks, which encompass people who refuse to make changes to fit into society. "Willing criminals" puts it well.


As for the green part, the Ai-Naidar themselves tend toward gentle hues. Grays and browns and light golds and such, with very watery eye colors. Shame, with his black pelt, is a striking rarity. One of the things that struck them when they met aliens was how vivid they were, particularly eye colors. Bright blue eyes, bright green, neon red, etc.

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[info]stryck
2007-05-27 02:27 pm UTC (link)
It sounds like a beautiful color to be, too. Deep green, with a hint of blue.

I love strong colors.

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[info]archangelbeth
2007-05-27 04:24 pm UTC (link)
That having them exist and not taking advantage of them is the point, because it's stressing that they matter but that they shouldn't be abused.

That makes total sense. (But then, I have wrapped my head around In Nomine free will stuff, which is all about "yes, you can do bad stuff, but you shouldn't" in many places.)

Willing criminals makes perfect sense, too.

Ooo, vividness. Cool! I had not realized that they were pale and "neutral" of eye. Too much Vah Shir association. >_>

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[info]wolfbrotherjoe
2007-06-06 07:56 pm UTC (link)
I just realized!

I was re-watching Babylon 5 the other day and started contemplating the concept of 'things which exist solely so that they should not exist'

Or, more specifically, traditions that exist specifically so that underlings can be exempted from them.

Specifically, what inspired my thinking in those terms was when Delenn first received Lennier, and asked him to look up. "But ... it is forbidden." "I cannot have an aide who always looks down. He will be forever running into things."

It was the same thing that she was told when she was assistant to someone on the gray council.

It made me think of a society where the 'higher caste' members were expected to exempt their underlings of abasement that is technically required.

The entire custom would be there only to be rescinded, as a reminder to the upper caste.

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[info]wolfbrotherjoe
2007-05-27 02:10 pm UTC (link)
I understand this world so well... I wish it could be understood by our society, but I feel so frustrated by it. Our society associates servitude with slavery, associates low-caste with failure, associates submission with low self esteem... and associates high-caste with pride, authority with deception, and discrimination with hatred.

What I wouldn't give to live in a world where the admonition "Know your place" was a guiding light rather than an insult.

I struggle so hard with a language which doesn't have the right words for how I feel.

You do so beautifully.

When I read your aphorisms, I feel simultaneously a great beauty and a great frustration. I'm sorry. Not to blow hot air up your skirts, but your writing has such a purity of vision and emotion that it evokes strongly within me for both.

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-27 02:20 pm UTC (link)
If it makes you feel better, I feel the same things trying to write them... and I haven't even gotten to some of my most cherished frustrations yet, which they address beautifully. I'm trying to figure out, in fact, how to put the next few into words...!

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[info]wolfbrotherjoe
2007-05-27 03:48 pm UTC (link)
That does, indeed, make me feel better, thank you. I know that it's not just me, and being part of a many feels better than being alone.

I think I just realized why the Exception has to be alone - because otherwise the exception 'community' would have a collective opinion that would start to override the individual viewpoint vital to the Exception's role.

Still very painful.

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-27 03:50 pm UTC (link)
Don't get to feeling toooo sorry for the Exception. S/he always has a best friend. :)

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[info]wolfbrotherjoe
2007-05-27 07:08 pm UTC (link)
Well, the 'painful' part comes from me and my perceptions, not necessarily from the Exception.

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[info]themaskmaker
2007-05-27 02:25 pm UTC (link)
We need a Kerishdar virtual world to role play in! :)

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-27 02:28 pm UTC (link)
You have made my BRAIN EXPLODE

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[info]themaskmaker
2007-05-27 02:39 pm UTC (link)
This one is sorry to have caused such a disturbance. :)

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-27 02:44 pm UTC (link)
*laugh!*

*hug*

Oh that was delightful. I feel blessed that [info]shadesong introduced us. :)

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[info]themaskmaker
2007-05-27 06:35 pm UTC (link)
You bless me too. *hug back*

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[info]themaskmaker
2007-05-27 02:24 pm UTC (link)
I can feel the Calligrapher's frustration at not knowing how to speak to his visitor.

I use (and I'm sure many of us use) different modes of language with different people.

Those who send mixed body/clothing messages are disconcerting.

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[info]_eljefe_
2007-05-27 04:55 pm UTC (link)
Like me? *laughs* In my case it comes from absorbing too many cultures, sometimes I mix and match.

And then other times I do it just because I can. *grin*

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[info]themaskmaker
2007-05-27 06:34 pm UTC (link)
I have no problem reading your body/language parl at all. *g*

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[info]moonfire77
2007-05-27 03:48 pm UTC (link)
I want to go there so badly.

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[info]batshua
2009-12-13 03:30 am UTC (link)
This.

I also wonder what the Calligrapher would write for me.

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[info]miintikwa
2007-05-27 06:43 pm UTC (link)
I had the same thought that [info]themaskmaker did, that it would be so nice to have a Kerishdar to escape to...

*chuckles*

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[info]dragontdc
2007-05-28 08:53 am UTC (link)
I am truly enjoying these glimpses into this world of Kerishdar. There is a "rightness" to it all that I find compelling.

I do wonder at the seeming lack of training-for-place that the Ambassador displayed, as if he had been thrust into a role for which he was unprepared. I would think that, like so many other roles, there would be a qualities and temperments suited specifically for the "Foreign Office". I understand that a representative of a noble family might be required to interact with foreigners, but even then (or especially then) there should be those whose purpose is to smooth the way and provide a psychic cushion between the ambassador and the foreign culture.

One would not wish one's culture represented by a person who was losing their center/grounding in it.

Simple speculation, of course.

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-28 01:10 pm UTC (link)
Mmmm. Perhaps there is more need for people who interact with aliens, than there are Ai-Naidar who are good at it... *grin*

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[info]chorus_of_chaos
2007-11-02 06:51 am UTC (link)
I think the author's name is Mary Gentle, she wrote two books about a world called "Orthe" I think a dual compilation of the two was finally produced...a big part of problems the alien contact teams had were "going native". It's an INCREDIBLE series and haiku jaguars stuff reminds me of it somewhat, I think she might enjoy the books somewhat if she had time/chance to read at least the first one. The second was not as well done.

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[info]chorus_of_chaos
2007-11-02 06:51 am UTC (link)
I think the author's name is Mary Gentle, she wrote two books about a world called "Orthe" I think a dual compilation of the two was finally produced...a big part of problems the alien contact teams had were "going native". It's an INCREDIBLE series and haiku jaguars stuff reminds me of it somewhat, I think she might enjoy the books somewhat if she had time/chance to read at least the first one. The second was not as well done.

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[info]stokerbramwell
2007-05-28 05:00 pm UTC (link)
So, at about what level of technology is this world? When I see the word "alien," I keep wondering whether you mean people from other cultures on the same planet or from other planets entirely.

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[info]tuftears
2007-05-29 08:09 pm UTC (link)
Gates!

Now I picture a giant Stargate with a silk caravan passing through into another world.

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