M. C. A. Hogarth ([info]haikujaguar) wrote,
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The Aphorisms of Kherishdar: ESAR
ESAR
M.C.A. Hogarth


esar [ eh SAAR ], (noun) – the quality that makes one a superb leader; this is a sublime thing composed of your character, your actions, your social position (rank and caste), your upbringing. There are many different kinds of esar.

      "I am sul Wakedzen Metrel-anathkedi," the youth said before he'd even advanced from the threshold of my studio. I toweled the sizing from my fingertips and set aside the gold leaf, then rose... but not with the haste his pride would have liked.
      "Anathkedi," I said, speaking in the Abased as was proper for one above me. "How may you be served?"
      "Next month I am to undergo the esar ritual," the youth said, drifting from scroll to open book as a butterfly unable to choose between flowers. "I should like an aphorism painted."
      I had heard that the head of Wakedzen was ill, but not so ill as to require his heir to be so swiftly promoted. "Of course, sul Wakedzen. Have you an aphorism in mind?"
      "Choose something appropriate," he said.
      I nodded. This was not an atypical request... but he continued.
      "Something to suit me," he said. "Something rich, in nacre and ground oceanstone. Something to suit my esar."
      "If it may be asked," I said, "what special quality of leadership has sul Wakedzen chosen from the Book of Precedents as his own?"
      "I have not," he said, lifting his chin.
      Despite myself, my ears twitched backwards in surprise. "Of the many pages describing the many forms of esar, there was none to which the heir to Wakedzen could cleave?"
      "What I offer is unique," he said. "Never has it been seen, nor equaled. See that the aphorism reflects this."
      "Yes, sul Wakedzen," I said.
      We spoke of schedules and colors. For many days, I sat in the sunlight and pondered a scroll for Wakedzen's heir. Then I sat at my slanted desk and opened the pots of nacre and ground oceanstone. With the hand that had won me my patrons and the ishas--the soul--that had won me my caste-rank, I penned his scroll. Several days later, a courier came and bore it away.
      Two months later, the scroll returned to me. When I tilted my head, hands outstretched, the irimkedi, the servant, said only, "Wakedzen rejected its heir."
      He said nothing more. We understood one another perfectly. I hung the scroll on the wall to await a more harmonious buyer.
      It reads: That which is old has been tried by time and found good.

The Aphorisms Website.


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[info]tuftears
2007-05-24 12:43 am UTC (link)
*looks bemused*

So his proposed esar was 'I am unique'? I can see why that would lead to a rejection, but how did the Calligrapher arrive at this aphorism from this declaration?

And what happens to a rejected heir?

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[info]miintikwa
2007-05-24 01:00 am UTC (link)
I, too, am curious what will happen to him. How did his ishas promote him to heir if he was only to be rejected?

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-24 01:34 am UTC (link)
On this point, the Calligrapher respectfully submits that to be an "heir" is not a caste-rank. Being poorly suited to run a household does not mean he cannot be a suitable noble in other respects... and that also, as subtle as it might be, there is individual choice in this society (the head of household's choice, in this case, of whom to appoint as heir), and there are mistakes.

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[info]miintikwa
2007-05-24 01:36 am UTC (link)
*nods* Ah, so the heir will need to have his ishas discovered, too?

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-24 01:51 am UTC (link)
He is already a noble. Just, perhaps, not a noble suited to running a household. But Ai-Naidar in the noble caste also serve supporting functions to Heads of Household... it is probably that this youth is more useful in that function, then as a leader. :)

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[info]miintikwa
2007-05-24 02:06 am UTC (link)
Ah. :D

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[info]ysabetwordsmith
2007-05-24 05:32 am UTC (link)
So maybe the heir wasn't totally an idiot, just a screwdriver being used to pound nails. (He still sounds rather idiotic to me, but I'll try to give him the benefit of the doubt.) His insistence on being unique obviously makes it hard for him to function in Ai-Naidari society. Maybe he'd make a good troubleshooter, finding new solutions to problems where "by the book" doesn't work well? Or they could do what some of my SF characters would do: make him a diplomat to an alien race who would appreciate his quirks instead of being annoyed by them.

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The Idiot Filter
[info]ysabetwordsmith
2007-05-24 12:49 am UTC (link)
I'm glad to see that 1) the Ai-Naidar have their share of idiots, like everyone else in the universe, and 2) they also have social mechanisms in place to help catch the idiots before they wind up in high-power positions.

My partner and I have a saying for occasions when somebody messes up a lunch order, or the like: "Thank goodness they don't work in Air Traffic Control." My guess is that the Ai-Naidar would handle upper-class idiots by either retraining them, or putting them in charge of something where failure would not produce monumental consequences.

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[info]manycolored
2007-05-24 01:08 am UTC (link)
I wonder how they will find and elevate a new heir?

I also wonder whether the development of such a personality was a fluke, or whether the Exception would find something to question about the circumstances that contributed to the creation of such a flawed... individual.

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[info]themaskmaker
2007-05-24 02:59 am UTC (link)
This is an excellent question.... I wonder, too.

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[info]archangelbeth
2007-05-24 01:41 am UTC (link)
A lovely, two-edged aphorism. If something is indeed new and unequaled in goodness, then it will be found good when it is tried by time.

But rejecting the old only because it is old can be quite the flaw, indeed, because there's something in there that's lasted, and filled some kind of need.

I shall go and snicker.

(And, yes, wonder how the process of rejection and finding a new heir goes. Because I am satiably curious...)

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[info]chlorophyta
2007-05-24 01:56 am UTC (link)
Hmm. I'm a bit stumped by this one. I can certainly see why the aphorism is appropriate to the story, but it seems a little odd to me that the Calligrapher would choose it for the specified request. It seems to almost blatantly rebuke the (prince?), and while I could expect an aphorism that could be seen in hindsight as a rebuke, one so obvious seems a little out of character for the Calligrapher. Have I missed something?

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[info]stryck
2007-05-24 02:07 am UTC (link)
Re-reading this, I see that the young man is also unable to settle. It could also be simple advice- if you haven't made up your mind, old things are usually very good.

The not-heir seemed to me not necessarily lacking leadership, as having it unformed. He could end up a leader, but he needed to choose something to focus on. Thus, the rebuke holds advice that is needed, but it seems to have gone unheeded this time.

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[info]chlorophyta
2007-05-24 02:15 am UTC (link)
I see your point, but for some reason there's just something about it that rubs my fur backward, you know? Perhaps it simply doesn't resonate with me the way the others have. Maybe I should give it a day ar two and try reading it again. =)

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-24 02:20 am UTC (link)
This is actually a good reaction, as I suspected this one of being controversial. :)

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[info]dulcinbradbury
2007-05-24 01:07 pm UTC (link)
I could have also seen it as a message to the current head of Wakedzen. "You're old, but, tried & true. Why pass it on to this twit?"

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[info]gryphart
2007-05-24 07:57 am UTC (link)
Probably for the best. I recognize some of that youthful twerp behavior, and that streak doesn't lend itself well to hierarchies (no matter what spot you occupy in it), but rather independence. Maybe he'd be a candidate for a future Exception, after he matured some?

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[info]wolfbrotherjoe
2007-05-24 12:27 pm UTC (link)
Foo...

See, there's someone who shoulda been shooting for 'exception,' if he's so proud of being outside of expectations.

There's such a huge different between someone who's outside and doesn't want to be vs. someone who wants to be outside because he thinks it makes him better. That's why the exception was respected, and this guy was just ... ooo, just soooo... Ew. He makes me upset. I bristle at him. I don't want to, but I do.

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[info]wolfbrotherjoe
2007-05-24 12:44 pm UTC (link)
Incidentally, apparently unlike others here, I both expected *and* hoped for the Calligrapher to do just such an aphorism. I see this society as being exceptionally polite ... but not willing to pretend someone isn't doing something wrong. This society doesn't ignore the elephant in the front room.

Even blunt as this is, I see it as the proper response from the Calligrapher, unwilling to support the noble's rebellion with his own silence. He would not say anything aloud, because that would be rude - but as a Calligrapher, his role is to choose and illustrate the correct saying for the situation, and sometimes that means picking one that the 'customer' would not like.

I don't like the word customer... it seems so ... inappropriate for the relationship between the Calligrapher and those he does his art for... as does client ... But I can't think of an appropriate word. Going to the Calligrapher usually seems to entail a certain amount of mental and philosophical intimacy... requiring a closer connection than simply 'consumer' or what not.

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[info]themaskmaker
2007-05-24 02:18 pm UTC (link)
Patron?

When I worked in the public library, we called those we worked for patrons. I loved it. Later, they changed the word to customer, because they wanted to change our emphasis to "customer service." I thought it was a bad idea, and I still do.

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[info]wolfbrotherjoe
2007-05-24 10:38 pm UTC (link)
Mnnnn... I think the feel of a Patron, in a non-modern context, involves the concept of the artisan's noble sponsor.

I could be wrong, but that's what I think of.

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[info]dulcinbradbury
2007-05-24 01:09 pm UTC (link)
I expect that the exception isn't nearly so brash. The exception simply doesn't *fit* the same way, as opposed to being so young and brash that zie needs to express hir uniqueness.

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-24 01:19 pm UTC (link)
Ah, see, you have pointed out this, so I don't have to. Youthful arrogance does not make a person an Exception. It just makes them young and arrogant. :)

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[info]dulcinbradbury
2007-05-24 01:32 pm UTC (link)
It felt obvious to me during the brief brush with the exception in the earlier story. She struck me as the type to quietly say, "But why is it that way? But what about this problem?" The type to find herself unable to grok certain aspects of the society in which she is raised. At the same time, she would be able to say, "No, that makes sense. That is good and fair."

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[info]wolfbrotherjoe
2007-05-24 10:31 pm UTC (link)
I didn't mean he would be *accepted* as an Exception.

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[info]dashingpooka
2007-05-24 08:54 pm UTC (link)
He is as yet not completely formed.

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