M. C. A. Hogarth ([info]haikujaguar) wrote,
@ 2007-05-20 11:56:00
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The Aphorisms of Kherishdar: MENUREDI


MENUREDI
M.C.A. Hogarth

menured [ MEHN yoo rehd ], (noun), singular menuredi: loyal servants of a liegelord or liegelady; a special connotation of fidelity and intimacy. The liegelord/lady counterpart is masured(i)

      I had not expected the irimkedi, the servant, who came to my studio for the review, but I did recognize her. Not as tall as the average Ai-Naidari, she was instead supernally graceful, as if the ancestors sought to compensate for her lack. Her simple robe had been fashioned of softest silk, the House emblem richly embroidered, and a flash of sunlight at her tail's end brought the eye to a ring there with dependent jewel. She had accompanied her Head of Household when that worthy came to commission a design for her seal. I was not often called upon to do such work, but I enjoyed it, though I rarely saw the stone stamp that would be carved from the final design.
      She was irimkedi, and so I spoke first. "Your mistress has not come?"
      "The design is to be evaluated by me in her stead," she replied, politely Abased. She read my incredulity in the faint twitch of my ears, for she lifted a wrist, the sleeve pulling back to expose a signet dangling from a chain.
      My brows lifted, but I bowed my head and indicated the table. "The sketch is here."
      Her shadow pooled over the parchment. Her mistress, following convention, had requested an abstract design, a cylinder long enough for her slender hand to comfortably hold when she used it to stamp her House sigil on official documents.
      "Is your lead available?" she asked.
      I glanced at her, but her face remained impassive. I brought her the requested lead, and she sat and began to draw--to correct my lines. With a few deft strokes she had solved several aesthetic errors I hadn't noticed and improved the grace of the design immeasurably.
      "This," she said, standing. "This will be acceptable when inked."
      I looked from the paper to her face, astonished. "You have a great talent, irimkedi."
      She brushed the dust from her hands and folded them into her sleeves, preparing to depart. "You are thanked, jakedi."
      "Why... why did you not...?"
      She canted her head. "Why was your path not chosen?"
      I nod.
      A tender smile touched her lips. She glanced at her feet, lost in some memory of feeling. At last, she said, "To be an artist is to serve many, but without intimacy. To be a servant is to serve one in a relationship closer than breath." She lifted her eyes. "My liegelady is loved. There is no other."
      I bowed to her then. She returned it and took her leave, and with it her shining. I stared after her long after she'd gone, and then I went back to my desk with the revised sketches. In the book I kept my ideas to be transferred to scrolls, I chased her devotion into words.
      There is no higher calling than to serve with love.


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[info]indigo_alamaris
2007-05-20 04:59 pm UTC (link)
Ah, beautiful, beautiful. I think if I was a person to cry, I would have, reading this...not because it was sad, but because it really, really touched me.
I was feeling very uncreative and uninspired today, but seeing this aphorism got me thinking again. Thank you. :)

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[info]anamacha
2007-05-25 10:46 pm UTC (link)
yes. This, especially the last line, carved the same reaction into me.

Which is to say, I did cry some.

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[info]lady_ravenlocke
2007-05-20 08:36 pm UTC (link)
As always, deftly painted in the words you wield so well. This was very touching, and a beautiful sentiment. Thank you so much for sharing.

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[info]miintikwa
2007-05-20 08:49 pm UTC (link)
*nods*

Truth, no matter where found, resonates.

This is Truth.

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[info]archangelbeth
2007-05-20 10:50 pm UTC (link)
Awwwwww. Is-sweet.

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[info]artfulruin
2007-05-20 11:16 pm UTC (link)
I needed this one today.

There were a lot of amazing things I "could have done," and sometimes I get morose about being here, mothering and managing a household.

But, done with great love, this too can be amazing.

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[info]altonwings
2007-05-21 01:55 am UTC (link)
Absolutely beautiful, and insightful at the same time. This piece really reflects a writing style that appears so effortless that the conversations must be true.

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[info]wolfbrotherjoe
2007-05-21 01:59 pm UTC (link)
It is perfectly accurate. Unfortunately, like Samwise Gamgee, I think most people in this world would not understand her.

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-21 04:02 pm UTC (link)
You are trying to activate my Samwise rant, aren't you.

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[info]tuftears
2007-05-21 10:24 pm UTC (link)
Rant on!

A lovely incense story, though I find myself wanting a little more diving into details here. Perhaps she'll come up again.

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[info]wolfbrotherjoe
2007-05-22 03:40 am UTC (link)
Oh? You have a Samwise rant, too? Is it the same as mine?

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-22 01:37 pm UTC (link)
I don't know. Is yours about sexualizing something that was already intimate in a very specific and different way?

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[info]wolfbrotherjoe
2007-05-22 02:05 pm UTC (link)
Sam ... has a purity of love, devotion, and service. Trying to turn that into a sexual attraction cheapens that relationship. I don't have an eloquent way of putting it.

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[info]anamacha
2007-05-25 10:48 pm UTC (link)
Not all intimacies are sexual in nature. To think the two are equivalent is wrong and abasing of both.

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-28 01:41 pm UTC (link)
Yes.

There is an aphorism brewing on this subject, obliquely.

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[info]silversliver
2007-05-21 03:38 pm UTC (link)
I feel the lesson is about letting go of what could have been, and concentrating on the most fulfilling aspect -- one's calling. As one of many talents and many possible paths (of which I've picked my way), I am finding insight and comfort in this piece.

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-21 04:02 pm UTC (link)
Ah! That is a nice thing to take from it!

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[info]stryck
2007-05-21 06:12 pm UTC (link)
I would think that all service is love. To serve requires the gift of your heart. Otherwise, it's just a job.

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[info]dnellin
2007-05-22 11:07 am UTC (link)
I like these stories.

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