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The Aphorisms of Kherishdar: LIJZAN
Because no society is perfect.


The Aphorisms of Kherishdar: LIJZAN
M.C.A. Hogarth

nelijzan [ neh lii JZAHN ], (verb): to deceive, purposefully; to put on a different face for the specific purpose of misleading someone. Derived from "lijzan", masks.

      I knew him for a mask-maker by the design on his sleeve so I was not surprised when he spoke first. The mask-makers sometimes behaved as public servants, several castes above their merchant status. It was perhaps a statement of irony that he used the grammar that indicated he was speaking as one above himself, while still making the transgression.
      "Pardon the interruption," he said. "Do you know where I might buy paint?"
      He must have just arrived to sell masks for the Winter Tryst. It was what they lived for: to make masks for entertainments was nothing. To make masks for the one event a year when all Ai-Naidar mingled in disguise, ignorant of caste and rank... that was a mask-maker's life.
      "I don't know," I said. "I make my own."
      "Ah," he said, ears pricking. "So do I, usually."
      It was a commitment to his art I was ashamed to admit I had not believed a mask-maker capable of. "What are you missing?"
      "Binder," he said. "And pigment for black."
      "What do you use for black?" I asked.
      "Carbon," he said. "For the expensive masks I grind onyx or hematite for a more subtle effect."
      And then there was nothing for it but to invite him to sit and have tea at the table I reserve for clients and discuss the minutia of our craft. When our shadows had stretched wan and thin, he said at last, "I cannot stay, alas. I must find a place to re-supply or I will not be ready for the Tryst."
      I looked at him then. His face was lined, not with poverty, but with austerity. In his eyes I saw something of myself. To be a public servant artist, as I was, required a true calling. But to be a mask-maker and fulfill one of our most unseemly needs, to be reduced to a merchant and a transient merely by association with that need...
      We cherished the children born of the Tryst's anonymous unions, but looked askance at the artisans who made them possible.
      I brought him my bottle of black. He glanced up at me, startled and uncertain. I set it on his palms.
      "Good luck with your work," I said.
      He stood, bowed deep--deeper than required. I considered that gratitude enough... but the following day there was a box on my studio doorstep. The mask inside was a thing of glory: elegant porcelain in white, bisque and sienna with garnets and a single fire opal.
      I thought of the truism, Who loves masks has no soul... and then of another, even deeper: All that is unjust changes in its time.
      I traced the empty eye socket and the black ink that lined it. "Your time will come," I murmured.


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How lovely!
[info]dakiwiboid
2007-05-13 11:05 pm UTC (link)
Again it's scented, but this time, the entire thing is studded in jewels! Thank you so much! I will read this one over and over, I think.

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Re: How lovely!
[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-14 12:53 am UTC (link)
I am trying to figure out how to do tastes, when I don't want to refer to human foods! This is not easy. "Tea" and "fruit" are easy to use, but bland. I want to evoke strawberries and ground black pepper and chamomile, but they're not going to have those things.

I really, really miss being able to speak a language of taste that we can relate to. I'm already pushing it a little with smell.

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Re: How lovely!
[info]archangelbeth
2007-05-14 02:08 am UTC (link)
Oddly, the first paragraph confuses me slightly. Speaking as one above himself? Drat, I'm not getting it.

I think you could add in a few human foods -- you're referring to "human" gemstones? Though those are a deeper level of design, and can form in other places, like as not.

Names for fruit can work. A name, a taste-like of "tart" or "delicate" or "distantly sweet" or "like red should taste"...

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Re: How lovely!
[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-14 02:20 am UTC (link)
*muse* Well, I'm positing a similar geological formation for their worlds; rocks seem more believable than foods when (for instance) you'll run into fruits you've never heard of from different countries, and that's just on this planet.

It's hard to convey the speech levels. A properly polite merchant would have addressed the Calligrapher in Abased form (which I've been rendering as the passive, so "do you know where paint may be bought" rather than "do you know where I might buy paint"), but there are prefixes/infixes that allow you to note circumstances when someone else is speaking out-of-proper-form: for instance, when you address someone of a specific rank, but whom someone above you in rank has decreed is worthy of particular honor and is thus exempt from speaking to you as one above themselves (and several mind-boggling permutations which allow you to politely disagree with other people's assessments or make your own).

Essentially, it's a form of advanced sarcasm and/or irony, for the Mask-maker to speak to the Calligrapher as an equal, but using prefixes that other people would use to indicate he's speaking above himself. A kind of self-mockery, perhaps, that only they are equipped to fully appreciate and that I had a heck of a time translating.

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Re: How lovely!
[info]themaskmaker
2007-05-14 03:43 pm UTC (link)
I understood it perfectly. :)

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Re: How lovely!
[info]archangelbeth
2007-05-14 08:03 pm UTC (link)
Ah! That's where I'm getting confused -- the "one above themselves." I wasn't tracking whether he meant that he was speaking as if his status were higher deliberately or accidentally, for some reason. I think it's the comma?

Or, to rewrite it and see if I gather your meaning: It was perhaps a statement of irony that he used the grammar that indicated he knew he was speaking too familiarly, as one above himself, while still making the transgression.

(Not saying you should rewrite it. And if you did, hardly saying that you should use my words! But trying to see if I've grasped the nuance...)

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[info]dulcinbradbury
2007-05-14 12:24 am UTC (link)
This is my favorite so far. Mostly because... it acknowledges flaws in their society while showing room for growth as a society. The Ai-Naidar have seemed beautiful but impossibly rigid at times.

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-14 12:48 am UTC (link)
There are several more like this coming, where we see the problems. I am posting them on whim, out of order (except for the last one, which has to come last), so I'm not sure when they'll go up... but they will...!

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[info]thedigitalkuri
2007-05-14 12:37 am UTC (link)
This is fangirlish.. but if I were in this society.. I think I would empathize, if not eventually find my calling in mask-making. There's something... about masks. They... hide, they entice, they do for us, what sometimes we cannot. And they also allow us to be and feel something else, even when the insides rebel and won't allow it.

This one replaces the others in the line of favorites.

Thank you. <3

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-14 12:50 am UTC (link)
Masks and the socially-approved ways of becoming anonymous are important safety valves in this culture, and very important: the Calligrapher has a blind spot where they're concerned, since he is a very straight arrow, even for an Ai-Naidari. :)

I suppose we should prod him into attending a Winter Tryst, shouldn't we? *grin*

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[info]ysabetwordsmith
2007-05-14 01:47 am UTC (link)
Oh yes, I'd love to see him at a Winter Tryst. He's even got a mask for it now. Be a shame not to put that to proper use...

I too like this story for its acknowledgement of flaws and the potential of overcoming them. I wonder if this is something which the current Exception will take up?

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[info]thedigitalkuri
2007-05-14 05:27 am UTC (link)
Oh yes yes!!!

I think that it would be incredible to see what our beauty is like when he's let the role of counselor and composed slip from his shoulders. It's a happy way of being in that kind of a mindset. But it very much becomes interesting to see what the phantom selves do when they are allowed to romp!

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[info]_eljefe_
2007-05-14 06:15 am UTC (link)
You should wander the [info]maskwood

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[info]themaskmaker
2007-05-14 03:46 pm UTC (link)
*grin*

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[info]_eljefe_
2007-05-14 06:11 am UTC (link)
[info]themaskmaker is going to especially like this one, I think.

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-14 01:51 pm UTC (link)
I thought of her when I wrote it. :)

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[info]themaskmaker
2007-05-14 03:46 pm UTC (link)
D'awwwww..... shucks. *beaming*

Yes, I adore this story. I was grinning and making little "ha!" noises all through it.

And I imagined sitting down with the Calligrapher for an afternoon of tea and craft talk, and yes, it would be a wonderful thing.

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[info]chlorophyta
2007-05-14 02:00 pm UTC (link)
I just read this one, mildly ashamed to admit that it is the first that I have read, though I've been sincerely looking forward to reading them all as you've posted them.

I cannot describe how reading this makes me feel. It is beautiful.

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[info]marykate_gift
2007-05-14 04:05 pm UTC (link)
Now? Who am I but a humble admirer of your work... but now? I'd love to see the mask...

:)

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[info]wolfbrotherjoe
2007-05-14 04:11 pm UTC (link)
I think this story really helps to make the world and the character seem more real.

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-14 07:18 pm UTC (link)
It's been commented that it's good to know the Calligrapher isn't a saint. He isn't! But he's close. ;)

I will take him to the Winter Tryst, so that people can see him even more discommoded.

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[info]miintikwa
2007-05-14 07:51 pm UTC (link)
Random curiosity- do they abandon their names when they become their callings? I would love to know the Calligrapher as a younger person.

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-14 08:13 pm UTC (link)
No, he still has a name. It's just that most of the people we see him dealing with know him as a public servant. One of them calling him by his name would be sort of like a stranger calling a judge by their name instead of "Your Honor." It's a familiarity.

I'll tell you his name by the end of this, though. Or he will, rather. :)

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[info]tuftears
2007-05-14 10:46 pm UTC (link)
I think this is my favorite of your incense stories so far!

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Hematite
[info]sieredith
2007-05-19 03:38 pm UTC (link)
I believe that ground hematite is -red-, not black. I have some gem knowledge. If you already knew that (hence the 'subtle effect' line), I apologize for seeming to be a know-it-all. An otherwise lovely entry.

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Re: Hematite
[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-28 01:44 pm UTC (link)
I was hoping it would result in a warm black when mixed with other pigments? I was working off a chart of pigments commonly used in paint. :)

Thank you for this comment, by the way!

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Re: Hematite
[info]siege
2009-01-08 07:23 am UTC (link)
Hematite becomes red when it is allowed to oxidize: in other words, when the iron is exposed. So ground hematite might be lightly oiled to retain its black, or quickly added to the substance for which it acts as pigment, so that air and water have less chance to work upon it.

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