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The Aphorisms of Kherishdar: DIQEDI

DIQEDI
M.C.A. Hogarth

diqed [ DEE kehd ], (noun) (singular: diqedi): mentor; one who can no longer perform all the duties of his/her caste-rank and is now primarily engaged in aiding others to perfect their own understanding of their duties. Often a role that falls to the elderly or disabled, but can sometimes land on one who is very good at teaching.

      I was sitting on the bench outside my studio door when a passing pedestrian brought the Guardian to me. I thanked her and helped him sit, moved by the feel of his corded arm beneath his sleeve. I would not normally touch a Guardian, but this particular male invoked an Exception: he was burned from cheek to knee on one side, with one hand transformed into a wasted claw and his knee poorly healed.
      "Thank you," he said politely, Abased.
      I dispensed with the formal grammars and sat beside him. "It is as nothing. Was it me you sought?"
      "If you are the Calligrapher?"
      I nodded.
      He blew out a breath. "Ah, then I would put a riddle before you."
      "Speak, friend."
      "An accident," he said, nodding toward his arm. "Alas, I did not receive this burn in defense of my lord... but rather by being beneath a vat of lye when it spilled. Now I retire from his side to teach his other Guardians what I know."
      "Once a son of Saresh, always a son of Saresh," I quoted.
      The burns had unbalanced his smile, but his laugh was a good one. "Just so. In anger, my lord ordered the entire run of paper bathed in that lye burned, and gave me a gift of rather more paper than I know what to do with. You are a man of the pen. What do I do with several boxes of paper?"
      I leaned back; together we enjoyed the late summer breeze in silence.
      "You must keep a third for yourself," I said presently. "To write what you have learned, to make it easier to teach."
      He nodded.
      "One third you should give to the House that trained you..."
      "Eredaeth," he supplied.
      "To Eredaeth, for their own teaching and record-keeping," I said. "And the last third, to the temple of Saresh. Priests are never done with paper."
      His rough face relaxed. "Ah, that is well-advised, Calligrapher. I thank you."
      "It is my pleasure," I said. "May I help you out of district?"
      "If it is not much trouble," he said, "I think I shall sit here in the sun for a time."
      "If it is not much trouble," I said, "I would remain with you."
      And so we did.
      A week later, he returned on the arm of a Guardian wearing the same House sigil. "For you," he said, passing me a red paper lantern with temple token dependent. "And if it pleases you, I would have you help me with my teaching book."
      "It does," I said, bowing. "And I thank you."
      I hung the lantern outside my studio with respect: who did not value the work of Saresh's sons, the Guardian caste? They guarded our streets, our borders and our lords. Inside, I sat and began work on the frontispiece for the Guardian's book. In blood-scarlet and silver leaf, I wrote: When the tree no longer bears fruit, rest beneath its shade and take grafts of its flesh.

The Aphorisms Website.


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The Usefulness of People
[info]ysabetwordsmith
2007-05-09 05:42 am UTC (link)
Ah, lovely!

For me, much of Kherishdar's charm comes from its determination to ensure that everyone can be useful. Few things are as destructive to happiness as feeling (or being!) useless. Americans have a right to "pursuit of happiness." I think the Ai-Naidari must have something like a right to pursue ... meaningful purpose, perhaps. We don't have that right, here, and lack of it is something that people complain about. It seems like something that would be worth pursuing more thoroughly, as a culture, than we do now -- because meaningful purpose tends to generate feelings of happiness and satisfaction.

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Re: The Usefulness of People
[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-09 02:50 pm UTC (link)
I think our ideal is... mmm. The notion that happiness is different for everyone, and so everyone should be free to look for it, and find what shape it is for them.

Their ideal is that happiness is a thing made by feeling like you belong and are useful, and so their emphasis on placement.

This may be why so many people feel uneasy reading about them: because we are taught that only we can know what makes us happy, and other people telling us what makes us happy will only result in us doing what -they- want, not what we want.

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Re: The Usefulness of People
[info]ysabetwordsmith
2007-05-09 08:45 pm UTC (link)
That sounds right. Both of those can be routes to happiness -- to different types of happiness -- though each of them, taken alone, may also leave a person open to different types of unhappiness.

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[info]razzek
2007-05-09 06:30 am UTC (link)
I can't remember if I ever thanked you for this story (darn my flighty brain for running away before I did, if I forgot). But thank you. This is a lovely story. It's calming, somehow, and wonderful to know that the Ai-Naidar always make use of a talent. :)

Also: I remembered a question about Kherishdar! This isn't far from my original poverty question, but it's closer to what I really wanted to ask: what is it like in the lowest caste? I was thinking of India and the caste of untouchables and, well... There appeared the question. :D

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-09 02:46 pm UTC (link)
Hmm. This is not a question the Calligrapher can answer, as the lowest caste is composed of willing criminals, people he does not have much truck with.

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[info]themaskmaker
2007-05-09 02:58 pm UTC (link)
Shame, perhaps?

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-09 04:08 pm UTC (link)
Just so. When the emperor tells the Calligrapher he is sending him to "the Bleak" to fetch Shame, it is the area where the criminals are housed, and Shame is there in an attempt to repair the worst of those situations.

Of course, these are the Calligrapher's stories... so some things have to wait. :)

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[info]chorus_of_chaos
2007-11-11 08:10 am UTC (link)
I don't seem to have found that story? I've seen this reference to "shame" even a picture, but either didn't catch it in the story or haven't found that set of stories on your site or something.

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-11-11 01:35 pm UTC (link)
Shame doesn't show up in the Calligrapher's life until after these stories. Writing his "prequel" stories to their meeting (which is a novel I'm working on now, which isn't done) is a task for the new year... sort of the dark version of the Aphorisms.

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[info]razzek
2007-05-10 06:09 am UTC (link)
That actually makes a lot of sense and answers the question nicely. Thanks! :)

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[info]ladytwnks
2007-05-09 06:40 am UTC (link)
i'm crying now. they are good tears, this story spoke to my heart. thank you for telling it, it is like gentle rain on the barren ground of my heart.

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-09 04:50 pm UTC (link)
*bows* Glad to be of service.

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[info]poliphilo
2007-05-09 09:55 am UTC (link)
That's beautiful

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-09 02:48 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! [info]razzek asked about the disabled, which is what inspired this one.

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[info]aureth
2007-05-09 12:02 pm UTC (link)
!

I count my donation as well worth it.

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[info]archangelbeth
2007-05-09 12:28 pm UTC (link)
Amen! (Now I'm feeling guilty that I didn't donate for this one, per se. Odd.)

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-09 02:46 pm UTC (link)
Yay! :)

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[info]dekarch
2007-05-09 01:10 pm UTC (link)
I love this story. It's beautiful.

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-09 02:48 pm UTC (link)
I admit to a soft spot for the Guardians. -_-

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[info]siadea
2007-05-09 01:35 pm UTC (link)
That is so lovely and moving. I love the good humor of it, most oddly enough. ('Priests are never done with paper' - good-humored, true, and coming from a male who is just as much never done with paper!) I also love the - the willingness to basically ask a stranger for advice out of nowhere regarding something to do with their trade, and the willingness of passers-by to render assistance. That says a lot to me about what kind of society it is, and very good things. Sort of a 'small-town politeness' about it, no matter what the size of the actual city is, and I love it.

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[info]eseme
2007-05-09 04:14 pm UTC (link)
Yes! You said it just right. A small-town feel, no matter how large the city (and I get the impression that it is a large city).

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-09 04:26 pm UTC (link)
The Calligrapher actually lives in the capital (not far, in fact, from the center of the city where the emperor is)... I think the small town feel comes from the fact that the city is divided into wedges, with each wedge overseen by a regal and his nobles, and that "district" has a sense of solidarity in that everyone in it owes allegiance to one particular person. You get slightly different flavors when you cross districts depending on who's in charge.

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[info]tonithegreat
2007-05-09 02:26 pm UTC (link)
Yay! I was hoping to hear more about guardians.

This story had the gamer geek in me thinking about what tech level Kherishdar might be at. I wonder if their rigid traditions have much room for changes in technology.

While it is good to hear that everyone learns from the expereince of others it was also really nice that you made the distinction that naturally good teachers are also in the teaching vocation, not just those too old or infirm to continue their previous vocations. Because we all know that there are plenty of individuals with tons of great expereince who can't teach that experience at all.

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-09 02:47 pm UTC (link)
They evolve. They do have scientists, and merchants and a military, and between those three technology is inevitable. I've seen guns, for instance (not at the Calligrapher's point, though).

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[info]siadea
2007-05-09 04:51 pm UTC (link)
...ooh. Kherishdar seems to have a really interesting relationship with beauty, technology, living things, et cetera - see the physician's usage of plants to treat disease, plants that he grows, personally, in a garden, and contrast that with our pharmacies for an example. I'd love to see more of that interplay, because I think it must give a really neat look to even the most advanced technology. (Which I think they must have; something about interplanetary travel seems to have been mentioned somewhere or other, I think? And they certainly know what aliens are!)

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-09 04:55 pm UTC (link)
You should see the rules for gun usage!

I will check out technology and see if there are any incidents there to record. Mostly it's... ubiquitous but rarely mentioned. What is peculiar is how they employ scientists/engineers. So I will keep an eye out for any passing examples of them.

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[info]nekomavin
2007-05-10 06:58 am UTC (link)
I do hope that such examples pass by at some point - personal interest. <grin>

I've found the setting and the tales deeply fascinating, but not as moving as some. I think in part it is because I found my place (and in some ways was guided to it) without too much struggle.

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-10 11:27 am UTC (link)
Hmm. Do you think that's their appeal, then? I haven't figured it out myself. :)

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[info]themaskmaker
2007-05-09 03:00 pm UTC (link)
One of my purposes in life is to help the elders around me become diqed. It's such an important role.

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-09 04:53 pm UTC (link)
I think we throw away too much when we decide that elders hit a point and then become people to be forgotten, thrown away or coddled. I read an article in the local paper about an elderly veteran (late 70s? 80s?) who decided on a whim to go check out the teen youth group at his church. At first the teenagers were unsure of what to do with him, but when it became apparent that he wanted to hang out and see what interested them, they adopted him, started playing their music for him, telling him about what it's like to be teens and (best of all) asking him for advice.

Quotes from the teenagers in the article indicated that they felt a fierce possessive love for "their" old man, and got a great deal out of him being a part of their lives. And of course, he enjoyed being a part of theirs as well.

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[info]ysabetwordsmith
2007-05-09 06:23 pm UTC (link)
I have recently conceived a hypothesis that age-segregation can be damaging. This is fairly obvious in the case of oubliettes where elders are stored, such as nursing homes and some retirement communities. Certain qualities become concentrated when the population is almost all elders -- a tendency to withdraw from society, to be preoccupied with the complaints of age, to become introspective, and habitual to the point of ossification.

But look what happens in public schools, where age segregation works the opposite way, with children crammed together so they outnumber adults. There the problems are hyperactivity, extreme selfishness, obsession with peer opinion, rebellion ... all the worst traits of youth, distilled and concentrated.

I think that people need diversity of age and outlook in their lives, on a regular basis. Too much type-sorting allows the negative (and sometimes, positive) features to heterodyne and intensify, in the absence of counterbalancing influences. Children help elders feel refreshed and interested; elders help children feel more patient and thoughtful. Both benefit from the interaction -- and may suffer from the lack of it, which then spins into problems with wider effects.

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[info]razzek
2007-05-10 06:13 am UTC (link)
You don't happen to have a link to this article handy, do you?

My greatest inspiration in life is my grandma. I want to be like her when I grow up (and, so far, I seem to be heading in that direction, much to my mother's dismay >D).

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[info]miintikwa
2007-05-09 08:49 pm UTC (link)
I so must donate more. These are fruits, juicy and refreshing, and so worthy of being read more and more.

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-10 11:31 am UTC (link)
*gets weird mental image of the Calligrapher as a strawberry*

O_O

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[info]miintikwa
2007-05-10 02:29 pm UTC (link)
*dies laughing*

*gets "Strawberry Fields Forever" stuck in her brain*

*gets mental image of Calligrapher writing on an easel in a strawberry field, and kinda likes it*

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[info]thedigitalkuri
2007-05-10 12:29 am UTC (link)
The guardian caste is always something interesting. What kind of rules bind them? What constitutes necessary violence?

It's very pleasing to see that they treat their hurt and their retired with dignity rather than with dishonor.

I love these stories. <3

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-10 11:31 am UTC (link)
Depends on the rank! The Guardians encompass the military, the "police" (more or less, though this function is slightly different from ours in a nuance I haven't yet uncovered, but probably having to do with the lower incidental crime rate), people who serve security guard-like functions over specific areas or things (like merchant shipping) and bodyguards. Each of those types of guardianship have different rules, and what typifies "necessary violence" for, say, a Guardian in the armed forces who is keeping aliens from getting ideas is completely different from what it means to a bodyguard who is defending life and honor of his liege.

(I say 'his' because this is a caste dominated by men by choice. Women are not barred from it, but do not seek it much either from what I've observed.)

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[info]batshua
2009-12-13 03:46 am UTC (link)
I got the impression that people tended to marry within caste. Who do the Guardians marry if most Guardians are male? Or are most Guardians also gay?

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[info]stokerbramwell
2007-05-10 12:47 am UTC (link)
I'm really enjoying these.

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