M. C. A. Hogarth ([info]haikujaguar) wrote,
@ 2007-04-26 09:34:00
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Current mood: melancholy
Current music:The Beloved - The Sun Rising
Entry tags:excerpts, the aphorisms of kherishdar, writing

An Aphorism in Thanks
Thanks so much for your comments yesterday... they were... timely, as later that day I received a "no, thank you" for the incense stories from the market I had the highest hopes for.

I suppose I can cast around and look for other places to sell them, but honestly I'm just tired of trying. I've been at this +10 years... after a while, you do get tired.

This one's about community, because you folk keep me going. Thank you all.


SASRITHI
M.C.A. Hogarth

sasrith [ sahs REETH ], (noun) -- favors promised to balance a small trouble or debt: the word is often extended to refer to the token used to denote that favor; righting imbalances in the social give-and-take is part of hasmera.

      I did not visit the physician until after notice of the widespread sickness's passing had been posted. That day I found him in the clinic yard, standing silently over his ravaged garden. Stunned, I joined him in surveying the ruin.
      "Your plants!" I said.
      "Served us well," he said, "for every one of them went toward healing the sick. I can mourn none of them... save the maiden's mantle." He looked toward a row of burnt vines with regret. "They are shade-lovers, and harvesting the others exposed them. The herbs I can replant from our lord's seed stores... but the maiden's mantles were a gift, for beauty only, and rare."
      That afternoon I thought of flowers and a commission I'd done several months past. In the bowl I kept for gifts I found the octagonal sasthrithi left by House Qenain's head. My living expenses were paid by my lord from the transaction taxes gathered in the district, but any gifts or tips were mine to use as I saw fit. With token in hand I closed my studio and took myself to Qenain, where the sasrithi earned me an audience with that lord. Qenain's business was botanical: plants grown for medicine mostly, but also for art. They had come to me for a chart of uncommon flowers suitable for art arrangements, and I vividly remembered painting the physician's favorite among the other second- and third-world cultivars. The sasrithi had been a generous tip from a client well-pleased by my efforts.
      "Maiden's mantle seeds!" the lord said, once I explained the favor I sought. "Exotic tastes, for a calligrapher."
      "They are not for me," I said, "But for the physician, whose garden lies denuded after the recent trouble. He can reseed the herbs, but..."
      The lord said, "I will take care of it."
      I set the token between us, as I was not of sufficient status to touch him. "Then I count this favor well-discharged."
      The next morning found the physician on my doorstep, flustered but smiling. "Well, you might as well come with me to breakfast, as it is your doing that I cannot enter my own clinic for the servants cluttering it."
      "Servants?" I asked.
      "Replanting my entire garden with live plants," the physician exclaimed. "Live plants... do you have any notion the expense? I was only planning to reseed the beds. And they are overseen by Qenain himself... who claims he is there at your behest!"
      "And your maiden's mantle?" I asked.
      "Enough and to spare, and other decorative flowers to boot," he said. "Imagine! Flowers!"
      There was a wonder and a gladness on him that belied his careless words. I smiled. "There is a poet reciting today near the cafe you like with the sweet rice and melon."
      "Say no more," he said. "I am entirely at your--and the sweet rice's--disposal."
      I laughed and closed the studio, leaving behind the aphorism I'd been working on: An Ai-Naidari is only as strong as his community.


Stardancer Home.


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[info]artfulruin
2007-04-26 02:08 pm UTC (link)
Oh, this is lovely. Just..... *breathing in deeply*..... lovely.

I understand your melancholy. I'm sorry about the rejection. *gently cupping your shoulder*

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-01 02:12 pm UTC (link)
*quiet purr*

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[info]newroticgirl
2007-04-26 02:12 pm UTC (link)
This is lovely. And well timed, as I'm feeling lonely and self-pitying this morning. My chosen community is most beloved. Thank you.

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-01 02:13 pm UTC (link)
Oh, we're glad it helped...!

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[info]arkofeden
2007-04-26 02:19 pm UTC (link)
The Ai-aidari world seems like it would be such a nice place to live... It's strict, but I love the connectedness and respect that people have for each other.

Thanks for the story!

--E.G.

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[info]wolflady26
2007-04-26 02:22 pm UTC (link)
Aww, that was beautiful! Especially coming, as it did, directly after reading this post. In it, the poster talks about how hard her father works, and how sometimes, he misses the days when he was a child and got a gold star for working hard. That's rare to have happen as an adult.

In your story, the physician works himself - and by extension, his garden - to the bone in order to help others. And the calligrapher sees this and takes the step that would show the most gratitude in the most deeply-felt way.

It is just beautiful when we can fulfill another's needs in such a perfect way, especially when the need was created by sacrifice for a greater good.

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[info]dulcinbradbury
2007-04-26 02:39 pm UTC (link)
Man... that post made me want to cry. Thank you for sharing it.

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[info]wolflady26
2007-04-26 02:41 pm UTC (link)
My pleasure :) [info]theuglyvolvo is an amazing writer. Her stories about her father, in particular, are just gorgeous. I highly recommend reading her.

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[info]marykate_gift
2007-04-26 10:59 pm UTC (link)
i totally signed up after reading her blog... appreicate you sharing it... :D

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-01 02:13 pm UTC (link)
That was a wonderful post! But I read her journal because of you already. :)

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[info]wolflady26
2007-05-01 02:48 pm UTC (link)
Hey, cool :)

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[info]ellyssian
2007-04-26 02:37 pm UTC (link)
Excellent.

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[info]floorlamps
2007-04-26 02:55 pm UTC (link)
That filled a need. Both of the incense stories you've shared with us have been of the perfect length to occupy a little niche in my heart that I didn't realize was empty. Thank you.

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-01 02:13 pm UTC (link)
*bows*

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[info]archangelbeth
2007-04-26 03:06 pm UTC (link)
Awwwww. That's neat.

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[info]dashingpooka
2007-04-26 03:35 pm UTC (link)
A request!

I'm requestin' that fans of Mrs. Hogarth's work publish a list of other authors they read. ...works are published when there is a market, and it might help if we, the watchers of this journal and the lurkers of the website share our interests. Provide some free market data that Hogarth might never ask for on her own.

Who's reading, what other authors are you interested in? How often do you pick up books? How would you define your interests? Sci-fi? Military sci-fi? Pshycological? Fantasy, historical, romantic? Smurf?

Provide two minutes worth of typing, and a list. ;)

Mrs. Hogarth, if you're reading, mind posting this request where folks can see it? ;)

Oh. And while I'm demanding the world, here...which publisher should I write to?

Please don't think me scary or stalkish. I'm simply determined. It's why I'm in the field I'm in. Ask around. ;) I deal with hard-headed engineers all day. Oh, and by the way, I also married one. :)

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-01 02:19 pm UTC (link)
Hmmm. This is an interesting idea! Mostly to help me find interesting other writers to read, though... that's the intention, right?

Which publishers to stalk? I don't know, there are only about 8 if I remember right... and I'm not sure stalking them will help. *muse* I'm not even sure having a list of you all salivating over this would help, though I could probably ask my agent.

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[info]lady_ravenlocke
2007-04-26 03:54 pm UTC (link)
Another lovely piece, my dear, and I'm so sorry to hear about the rejection of the incense stories. My roommate [info]reverend_coyote and I thought they were a wonderful idea.

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twice read twice loved
(Anonymous)
2007-04-26 05:03 pm UTC (link)
I read it twice. I loved it twice. Second time was even better. Thank you again for sharing. And if you decide to seek our help for publication, I am on board.

:)
marykate

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[info]kyburg
2007-04-26 06:08 pm UTC (link)
Do your best.
Clean up your own messes.
Remember your impact on others.

And I think the last one is the most important - if you remember your actions impact others, both for good and ill - it makes it easier to choose a correct path.

It always makes more sense to share.

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[info]wolfbrotherjoe
2007-04-26 06:56 pm UTC (link)
My chest tightens, my eyes mist. A moment of beauty, laid out in paragraph and word, where all are beautiful in their selflessness.

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-01 02:20 pm UTC (link)
The Calligrapher points out it is not selflessness... it is the realization that the spear in the heart is the spear in your own: you are he.

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[info]wolfbrotherjoe
2007-05-01 02:58 pm UTC (link)
All are one.
Others are self.
It is as important to remember we are not separate at all as it is to stay separate.
What happens to the least of us happens to us.

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[info]jim_lane
2007-04-26 07:02 pm UTC (link)
I'm sorry your stories earned you a rejection note. (And yes, it does get discouraging...)

The "SASRITHI" snippet was delightful. Thank you!

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[info]eseme
2007-04-26 08:11 pm UTC (link)
That was amazing. So perfect in its brevity and emotion. I continue to be confused that work of this caliber is not seen for what it is and published.

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[info]tuftears
2007-04-26 08:57 pm UTC (link)
*checks the garden for catnip-derivatives* };)

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[info]razzek
2007-04-27 07:03 am UTC (link)
That was very good to read. The worth of other people, to help and hold one another up, is immeasurable. Thank you for the reminder, and thank you for the brightness in dark times.

I'm very sorry I wasn't there for you yesterday. I meant to be, but I managed to forget. I may not be able to hold many of your stories in my hands (yet), but I hold all of them in my heart and I have always been glad that you shared them.

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-05-01 02:20 pm UTC (link)
*hug* It's okay. You have been here other times, and that makes a difference. :)

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[info]indigo_alamaris
2007-04-27 08:05 am UTC (link)
Absolutely beautiful. :) I'd say something much more coherant, but illustrating my thoughts in text seems to be beyond me this week--I do second the other comments left here, though. You have such a gift for touching the parts in us we didn't know we had.

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[info]aine6
2007-05-03 02:03 am UTC (link)
I am very sorry to hear that these stories were rejected - I think they would be even more beautiful as printed words on paper. This particular story is a beautiful work in any medium. I find myself drawn to the point-of-view of the physician and his reminder that good friends are the greatest gift. A strong community indeed!

When you first began writing of the Ai-Naidari, I bristled at the idea of a society that is so structured and rigid. The idea of being forbidden to speak to someone without permission or having one's place in society determined for you is just contrary to my idea of happiness. After reading these incense stories and learning more about the Ai-Naidari, I am beginning to understand the beauty and harmony that results from such a society. While I personally may not be comfortable in it, I enjoy the exploration of the culture. The good becomes more clear with every word, and I no longer bristle at the thought, but eagerly await learning more. Thank you for suffering the difficulties so that we as readers can be brought to understanding.

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