M. C. A. Hogarth ([info]haikujaguar) wrote,
@ 2007-03-26 15:26:00
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Entry tags:ai-naidar, meta-conversations, writing

Not Another One...
"Hey, no, wait!" I exclaim. "I was looking for short story ideas, not novels!"

The slim shadow in his black cloak says, "You were looking for the Calligrapher's foil."

"Yes, but--"

"Here I am," he says. "Or shall I depart?"

"No," I say and cover my eyes. "But I have too many irons in the long-fiction fire. I need fewer of them, not more."

The hem of his robe and cloak flare, twin black edges thin as paper, looking almost like the petals of a flower in motion. I find myself looking up--way up--at an angry Ai-Naidari male with stunning, colorless eyes, their pupils crisp against the white. "Cram me into a shorter story, if you like. Try."

I squeak.

His smile is faint and without humor. When he stalks away the hood slides down his silky hair, stygian black.

I sit abruptly, holding in my metaphorical hands a depth of sudden linguistic concepts that I didn't even realize I needed. That I would need to explain the long, slow resolution of the wounded mess of the visitor's heart. He doesn't have a name yet. Just a vocation. The Calligrapher, golden and gentle, serves Civilization.

This creature...

I am the altar upon which Civilization sacrifices its murderers, its thieves. I am their Correction... or their destruction. I serve that which all civilizations need to survive.

I serve Shame.


I lean my head into my arm and wonder what I'm getting into this time.

Stardancer Home.



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[info]razzek
2007-03-26 08:03 pm UTC (link)
Oh my. o.o He's...intimidating. *hides*

I dunno if this will help or not, but I noticed in Alysha's Fall that all the individual stories, when put together the way they were, read like an amazing chapter book. I'm re-learning how to write and I've been sort of experimenting (or at least coming up with ideas for experiments) with using short stories as chapters...er, if that makes any sense. :P The incense stories read really well on their own, but you've got a really good gift with tying short stories together into one larger story while still keeping them individual should a reader find only one.

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[info]artfulruin
2007-03-26 08:16 pm UTC (link)
I empathize. *comforting hug*

I've got a new mask that is demanding to be made. The Handmaiden. I don't want to.

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-03-26 08:18 pm UTC (link)
What's preventing you?

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[info]artfulruin
2007-03-26 08:22 pm UTC (link)
Making it will dredge up vivid images and themes from my childhood. Not nice ones.

But it's right. It has something to say, and it deserves to be heard.

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-03-26 08:26 pm UTC (link)
Perhaps it is not yet the time, though.

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[info]artfulruin
2007-03-27 02:31 pm UTC (link)
You're right. It isn't time, not quite yet.

But you know how it is when they push...

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-03-28 12:36 am UTC (link)
Yes... yes indeed. :,

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[info]indigo_alamaris
2007-03-26 08:35 pm UTC (link)
*cringe* Oh dear. I sympathize...last week I got two new novel plots and a short story thrown at me, and just a few days ago another novel bricked me upside the head.
Good luck with getting everything organized and stuff. This one is clamouring for attention with...Morgan's second book and the Kat/Jade one, yes? I seem to recall you mentioning both of those.

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[info]sappersgt
2007-03-26 09:18 pm UTC (link)
I like this guy! Of course, I would. :) What's the short form of his vocation?

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-03-26 11:44 pm UTC (link)
Their society is extremely rigid in terms of everyone being expected to fulfill their social obligations. If you fail to do so, you are punished--but the punishment is supposed to be designed to stress exactly how you've failed, with the intent of teaching you NEVER to do it again.

It would be like... if people who sold drugs were forced to have bad trips over and over until they said 'I'll never EVER EVER SELL DRUGS AGAIN.'

If someone transgresses again, it is often considered the fault of the person who administered the Correction for not coming up with a good enough Correction (despite consulting the book devoted to suggesting such punishments). And when they fail, they call in this guy, who is considered a master of suiting punishment to crime.

So basically, he's always seeing the dregs of society and punishing them until they become good citizens again... and thank him for it.

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[info]archangelbeth
2007-03-27 12:29 am UTC (link)
Judgment!

No, wait, that's In Nomine. Let me slink away now.

(Though Dominic's got a rather twisty view of the world because of his job, too...)

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[info]sappersgt
2007-03-27 11:24 am UTC (link)
Sweet. Sort of like a therapist, judge, and corrections officer.

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-03-28 12:36 am UTC (link)
Yes. And occasionally, at the very last resort, an executioner (which in their society, is more like assisted suicide).

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Cool!
[info]heirondal
2007-03-26 09:31 pm UTC (link)
Looks good what ever it is!

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[info]grntserendipity
2007-03-26 11:14 pm UTC (link)
Ooooooooooh. He is going to be an amazing story, I can feel it. :)

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[info]haikujaguar
2007-03-26 11:39 pm UTC (link)
Wait until you see his portrait. ;)

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[info]siadea
2007-03-27 12:11 am UTC (link)
...

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...you have just hit one of my most favorite character types. (From reading the comments, that is.) From one of my favorite story-tellers.

... I'm kind of wide-eyedly sitting here pleading to be allowed to read his story, wherever and however it may happen.

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